A Study in Scarlet Women-A Goodreads Review

A Study in Scarlet Women (Lady Sherlock, #1)A Study in Scarlet Women by Sherry Thomas
My rating: 5 of 5 stars
I loved, loved, loved the characters of Charlotte Holmes and Mrs. Watson. They haven’t just undergone a sex change. Their personalities and backgrounds are complex and intriguing. Charlotte has sisters, is addicted to food and in love with a married Lord Ingram Ashburton and, of course, she’s as brilliant and as observant as the famous detective she’s based on whereas Mrs. Watson is an actress, a former mistress and a member of the demimonde; she’s funny and fascinating. Both women cope with and rise above the restrictions of Sherlock’s Victorian England.

Oh, and yeah, there are murders and crimes to investigate, too. A Study in Scarlet Women has everything I look for in an enchanting read. If you like fun characters and Sherlock Holmes type mysteries, this is a read for you.

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I Am Princess X- A Goodreads Review

I Am Princess X by Cherie Priest
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

May and Libby have been best friends since fifth grade, but it seems like forever to them. Together they create an anime adventure called Princess X. May writes the stories and Libby brings them to life with her drawings. Neither May nor Libby have any other friends. They don’t need anyone else. Then Libby’s mom falls asleep at the wheel and drives off a bridge. Libby drowns, and May is left alone. She doesn’t even have Princess X because in his grief, Libby’s dad has the house and everything in it, including boxes of Princess X tales, given away.

Without Libby, May lives on as a half-person for years until one day she spots a Princess X sticker, which leads her to finding a Princess X website. Could Libby still be alive? Is so, where is she? And why hasn’t she contacted May? May and a new-found computer hacker friend investigate using the clues in the web-published Princess X series, and of course, it puts them in the cross-hairs of a computer-savvy serial killer.

I love how the anima adventures blend into May’s real world and how Libby and May’s friendship transcends her death. The settings are unique and vividly described and the action kept me turning the pages.

If you like Princess stories or YA stories about plucky characters who will let nothing stand in the way of their friendship, I bet you’ll love this story. It’s a fast read that’s well worth your time.

Just so you know–I borrowed this book from the public library.

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Without Saying a Word -A Goodreads Review

Without Saying a Word: Master the Science of Body Language and Maximize Your SuccessWithout Saying a Word: Master the Science of Body Language and Maximize Your Success by Kasia Wezowski
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

Whenever I see a new book on body language, I try to obtain a copy. They all have interesting insights and observations about how people communicate. This one does, too. In fact, it contains decades of research, but that research is clearly and simply explained. The actions and expressions talked about are also understandable and easy to picture.

The book does what it should do—it communicates. I loved straightforward descriptions as well as the recaps and short summaries at chapter ends.

Clearly, Without Saying a Word will be a go-to-reference for me. If you like people-watching and learning about how we, humans, communicate, I recommend you add this to your reading list.

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Good News From the 2018 Prism Contest

I’m honored to announce Other Than earned Third Place in the Steampunk and Historical category of the 2018 Prism Contest.

Thank you, readers!

Unforgettable Reads Blooming in Mary’s Garden

Unforgettable Reads Blooming in Mary’s Garden
Mary Martinez 

Mary is giving away 2 $20 Amazon GC’s and an ebook of Disappear during this tour. Mary’s Cover designer, is giving away one cover design for one lucky author. Please use the Rafflecopter below to enter. Remember there is a chance for you to enter the giveaway every day. So join us all through the tour for fun posts, interviews, and prizes. You may find the locations to all the tour stops here.
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When one of their own is threatened, their bond is as strong as a badge of steel.

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Genre: Romantic Suspense

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Four Sisters

It was the 60’s, she found love…
but started a war.

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~*~*~*~*~*~About the Author:

Mary and her husband love to travel, especially to the Caribbean for relaxing, and Italy for the wine. And most recently she discovered she was Irish and Scottish, of course they had to visit Ireland and Scotland. Mary fell in love with both, but the green hills of Ireland felt like home. With the experience from the exotic places she has visited, she is able to fill her books with colorful descriptions of cities, painting a colorful backdrop for her characters. One of her favorite US destinations is New York/Brooklyn, where her beloved Beckett’s live. When she visits, she can wander their neighborhoods, favorite parks, and visit their favorite pub, Putnum’s.

They are avid concert ‘Ho’s’! Yes, they pretty much want to do them all. They love outdoor amphitheaters the best and attend as many during the warmer months as possible.

Mary writes mostly romantic suspense, romance, women’s fiction, and she has just begun to dabble in young adult mystery. She is a member of Romance Writers of America (RWA). During her writing career she has been a conference coordinator, workshop presenter, and chapter president for the Utah Chapter of RWA. In 2007 she was presented with the Utah RWA service award in acknowledgment and appreciation for outstanding service. Mary has also participated in numerous library panels on writing and co-presented a workshop on writing a series at the League of Utah Writers conference.

Mary and her husband are also enthusiastic college football fans. They have season tickets to the UTES, University of Utah Football and they tailgate every game. They love tailgating so much, that they were married at a tailgating in 1999.

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Julia Vanishes–A Goodreads Review

Julia Vanishes by Catherine Egan
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Julia and her brother are orphans and members of the Spira City thieves’ guild. Her brother’s a mechanical genius, but Julia’s gift is better. She can vanish at will. It’s not invisibility. She steps into another space where she can watch the area she left. To help the guild, Julia accepts a job as a housemaid in Mrs. Och’s strange household. She believes she’s to discover what’s happening behind its doors, and there’s a lot going on. For one thing, a convicted magic practitioner-turned-professor keeps magical tomes, when magic is outlawed, a crime the government drowns witches for. Julia puts this down to Mrs. Och and her associates running an underground railroad, but that doesn’t explain the cursed werewolf lurking in the basement or the witch, who may or may not be the target of a serial killer moving in with a toddler in tow. And, guess what—the toddler can see Julia when no one else can. Soon, Julia discovers a link between the mistress of the house and an ancient demi-god.

I like Julia’s take-no-prisoners spunk, and the relationships she has with her brother, ex-boyfriend and mentors. They’re all thieves, but they care for each other. In fact, it’s because she wants to protect her family that she does something dastardly she quickly regrets.
The world, which has Victorian and steampunk vibes, is interesting, but the magic system is even more intriguing. I don’t want to give too much away, so I’ll just say witches cast spells with the stroke of a pen.

If you’re like me and you search for new authors, feisty heroines and fascinating world building, this might be the read for you.

Just so you know, I borrowed this book from the library.
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#Camp Nanowritmo Winner

I’m pleased to announce I’ve met my Camp Nanowritmo goal. I love writing with buddies and cabinmates, and I love crossing the finish line.

Thank you, National Novel Writing Month staff, participants, and friends.

Polish Your Query Know-How

Want to improve the chances of selling your manuscript? Improve your query.

At this month’s Wisconsin Romance Writers’ Milwaukee Meeting, Lorelie Brown, an award-winning author with close to twenty published novels under her belt, gave us the down and dirty on how we could make our querying process more successful.

First, before a writer starts querying, she should do her research. Use sites like: Absolutewrite, Writer Beware, and Query Tracker, where other writers have contributed accounts of their experiences. These can help an author discover a particular agent or editor’s response time, his/her percentage of rejections and offers for representation and other useful boots-on-the-ground information

Next, develop a method to keep track of the editors or agents contacted, what has been sent and when it was sent. This is particularly useful if an author is marketing multiple manuscripts.

When writing a query, it’s important to keep words to around 250.

Answer the each of the following questions in a tightly written paragraph. (One paragraph to answer each question.)

  1. What does the protagonist want?
  2. If this is a romance, what does the love interest want?
  3. What does the protagonist need to do and what happens she/he doesn’t? In other words, what’s the conflict? What are the stakes?

Conflict makes a page-turning story and that story needs to have both internal and external stakes. Lorelie said that many of the novice queries she’s read usually have all external stakes. She gave an example like this one:

Ever since Knight Wintercrest rescued Lady Summerside from kidnappers, they’ve been in love; however, her family wants her to marry the villainous Lord Ghastly. Will their love survive?

If Lord Ghastly dies, say a rock crushes him, there’s no reason Wintercrest and Summerside can’t live happily-ever-after. The conflict here is all external. Lorelie advised us to give our conflict the sudden death test. If a falling rock can solve the problem in the story (take out the villain and sweep away all obstacles to a happy ending), we as authors need to work on our story’s internal conflict.

She stressed the importance of internal conflict because that’s where she sees the drama and the emotional connection between the characters and the reader is forged. What’s internal conflict? She threw out some examples: “I can’t love because…” or “Everyone’s left me, and you will, too.”

Lorelie said that after you’ve clearly laid out the story’s goals, motivation, conflict and stakes, it’s time to tell the person you’re contacting a little about yourself.

In the last paragraph of the query authors should give their writing credits like the writing organizations they belong to or their previously published work. In addition, they can detail contest wins and life experiences that add credit to their story.

Writers also need to include contact information like phone numbers and e-mail addresses. They also need to state whether their project is completed or in progress and how many words it is. When reporting word count be sure to round up.

Once your query’s complete and you’ve sent it out, Lorelie gave this advice—just keep writing. Successful writers are the one who haven’t given up.